Just a thought….

🤔

“What shall the Day Bring?”

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Up in Morning Sun lighting my rising.

I look to the Horizon shining New…

I think, sinking into the memories of a Dream…

The script, the melody this Day dances to,

Sits…

Written upon beats of the Heart.

Every Pusle charges me forth!

Forward into..,

“Whatever the Day may Bring…’

‘I dive in…”

4 thoughts on “Just a thought….”

MOMENTS

Beautiful words. You only need to change Pusle for Pulse on line five. Your poems are very powerful with original and vivid images. Great work!

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May 4, 2018 at 8:37 am Reply
1. taylorspoetrycorner
  
  Thank you for the critic, I appreciate it. I’m glad you enjoyed the poem, thanks again for following
  
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  May 7, 2018 at 8:10 pm Reply
  1. MOMENTS
    
    You are welcome.
    
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    May 7, 2018 at 8:18 pm
Edward Taylor III

@ Moments
Made some changes, what ya think🤔👍

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May 8, 2018 at 12:46 am Reply

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